Introduction (pages 9-12)
1. "Living a 'literate life in the information age' increasingly means learning to navigate these spaces, managing one's identity and online data, and considering complex issues of privacy and representation" (10).
This quote is important because the whole paper is basically about this single sentence. The whole paper is about how one person (Ronnie) uses his social media (those 'spaces') to represent his identity. This is what we need to do in our Introduction. We need to introduce our main topic and what our whole paper is about.
2. "Using ethnographic case study data, this article examines how one undergraduate student integrated his use of social network sites into his everyday literary practices to represent his identity" (10).
This quote is also important because it not only specifically says that she focuses on one individual, it tells us what kind of study is used (ethnographic). We need to describe, just briefly, that we are interested in only one person's social media and we need to describe how we gathered this data (apart from the Methods section).
Methods (pages 12-13)
1. "The information discussed in the profile tour gave me an overall sense of how Ronnie perceived his own identity representation online, some history behind that representation, and his perspective on what those representations meant to him" (13).
This quote is important because we can directly translate it to our own project. We need to make sure that our screencast interview will give us enough detailed information about our subject. We cannot simply make rash judgements or assumptions (kind of like what Anna was saying in class), but instead, we need to use this interview to gather hard facts about the person. We need to not only gain information about their social media site, but also about their personality and perspective about themselves.
2. "The research interviews, for example, allowed me to gauge my own interpretations of comments Ronnie posted online, as well as to gain background information unavailable in the textual activity I recorded" (13).
This quote is important because it takes into account her own interpretations. This cannot be like a Biology research paper where it just states the hard facts. That gets boring. We need to integrate the facts with our own interpretations (without making judgements). This will give us a sense of how this person works into their own community.
Overall, a very important part of the Methods section was all the subheadings. This makes it a lot easier to navigate through the paper and figure out what we are talking about. The subheadings allow us to focus our attention on one aspect of the project.
Results (pages 13-30)
1. "The information he shared on Twitter varied widely, such as updates on what he's listening to, thoughts and musings on his way to class, images from his daily life, and questions to his friends about weekend plans or other topics. Some of these tweets were updates on his mood and daily activities" (15).
The paper then goes on with examples of particular tweets. This quote is important because it shows the structure of how we should go about our own paper. Since we cannot and should not integrate all the tweets we saw on their profile, we should generalize them into categories and then pick out certain ones that stand out and are important in the person's identity & community development. This takes into account who the audience is and what point you are trying to get across with the paper. Everything must tie in to what their identity is within social media.
2. "Through these tweets, Ronnie showed himself to be busy and social, involved in musical performances, video games, and social activities with friends and family. These tweets gave Ronnie's Twitter followers a glimpse of not only his daily thoughts and activities but also his location" (16).
This quote is important because it showed how Buck integrate the tweets and her own interpretations. She gathered information and tweets and made a very educated interpretation of what those tweets meant regarding identity and community development of Ronnie through social media. It shows how we should integrate our own interpretations of their social media (tweets).
The use of specific photos that Buck gathered online were also put into the results section. This is important because it is a great example of what we could do with the pictures we think are important to our author. Because the audience (Nicole) is not going to creep on their twitter, putting these pictures up and demonstrations of what we see is a great tool to use when getting your point across.
Discussion (pages 30-34)
1. "Part of managing one's online identity, I argue, involves small interventions like this, ways for individuals to adapt the interfaces of social network sites to work more effectively for their needs" (32).
2. "While social network sites often place a number of restrictions on users' activities, individual users adapt these guidelines for their own uses and their own meanings" (32).
Both of these quotes are important because it does a huge thing for the paper. Taking the information from Ronnie's case study, she generalizes the results and her interpretations to the general public. She states what she believes is applicable to everybody. This is the "so what" part of the paper. This is the identity and community findings. This is how social media establishes an identity for oneself.
3. "There have always been technological, material, social, and rhetorical constraints placed on literacy, and social network sites provide one example through which to consider how writers work within specific forms of constraints to represent themselves in digital spaces and to interact with others" (33).
This quotes explains how social media and literature are similar. Specifically, it shows that social media is a form of literacy. This is important because we are using literature and language in social media to establish ourselves and the communities we are associated with.
Conclusion (pages 34-46)
1. "Ronnie's activity within these spaces represents important literacy work that relies on his knowledge of site infrastructure, genre conventions, and audience" (35).
This shows how her case study backs up her idea that social media is an example of literature and literacy.
2. "Viewing this rich literate activity as part of students' everyday lives will give us a greater understanding of the literacy experiences they bring with them to the classroom" (35).
This is important because it is another "so what". This is how Buck interprets her results and translates the results within her own life. We need to do this in our paper. This isn't a research paper, it is an application paper. We need to state why this is important in our own lives. We need to say how we construct our own identity online and how we integrate in specific communities.